Scratch storyboard update

When filming we changed our storyboard slightly as we found other ideas thats we could add to make it effective.
After the initial tally scratching, we have the man walking into the building. He then walks down a flight of stairs, and down a corridor, turning left. He enters a room, and slams the door. Sitting down at his desk, he finds a small piece of paper saying 'YOU ARE NEXT', and he throws the contents of his desk to the floor. He hears a large bang, and stands up, only to find a woman walking in at the same time. She states it is his turn, and shoots him.
After each scene, we will insert a credit, and have selected the credits we wish to use.